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For those who care, Kjhf is my initials. It is not random. I am in hot pursuit for music master. But I have a long way to go. **I'm on holiday in Denmark from 3rd August for 3 weeks. :D **
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Y'know, I didn't even realise there were only 2 instruments, because the harmony was right on.
The only things I can think of is to:
A) Give it a more "complete" end, bring the two instruments together for a final harmony, and trail off. You were close in the piece.
B) More instruments (which you're doing). I suggest a flute perhaps, or another main instrument.
C) Vary the dynamics and silences more.
If you continue then so shall I.
-Kjhf
Author's Response:
Thanks! After listening to it a few times I realized that the end really does need to be changed, and a flute might work, it would have to have a fair amount of... altering. I don't really have any good flute patches to play around with :/ I might add a bass drum as well, not like a rhythm, but just a big THUD! at key points, maybe near the beginning, what I'm finding hard is to add more without mucking up the harmony. I really appreciate your feedback, thanks!
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I take it you love eJay :P
Author's Response:
Well I got it for free so I thought, why not make something good from it. ;)
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In my opinion, your best piece ever. Just to say, there are 2 auras you've missed - the bot aura (purple) and the lvl60 aura (???).
This is just amazing though. 10/10
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Thought it was quite slow to start, and as you said in the description, it doesn't really fit.
Liked it when the song "started" though.
Cool.
Author's Response:
Thx! And btw, I said that solo fits the riff. You know, this 'intro' was invented really fast I didn't thought that it would do so well :D. Thx again! \m/
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This is really catchy and great! Good job!
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